chasing rainbows

when I was young
I tried to catch a rainbow
I ran as fast as I could
but I never got to it
so I stood and watched
the beauty fade instead
the rainbow was like
brush strokes in the sky
so perfectly painted
I knew there could only be One
who was the artist
I wasn't after the pot of gold
though that would have been nice
I just wanted to touch the rainbow
the rainbow that made me believe
there was something else out there
so I chased it
I wanted to ask it
what it would be like in the end
I thought that maybe it would know
but I couldn't catch it
so I stood and watched
the colors fade
but I never forgot
the day
when I chased that rainbow
and I had to let it go

Just one of my early childhood memories...


  1. Beautiful poem, Tane, very descriptive.

  2. Beautiful!!! You did a wonderful job on this pretty post Tane. I love the words in this post it made me happy.... :)
    Grace xxx ♥ :)

  3. Wow! Tane, you are such a AH-MAZING writer! hehe Keep it up!


    1. Aww, thank you Nat. You're a great writer as well. :)
      Tane ♥

  4. This is just such a beautiful post,you are such an outstanding writer

    1. Wow, thank you so much, Lila. :)
      Tane xxx

  5. *coughcough* some awesome writing right here. (: i love it!
    rainbows and dreams


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